Revise Hero Essay

Students - DUE Thurs Oct 11th  or Friday Oct 12th

Please log into Myaccess.com* and edit/revise your Definition of a Hero essay.  The edited/revised version should fix the following errors:
Editing
1. Spelling
2. Grammar (especially Sub/Verb agreement)
3.  No contractions
4. No 2nd person pronouns (you, your, yours)
5.  No use of the word "Reason(s)"
Revising
1. Intro paragraph must include a thesis sentence  
2. Length must be 5 paragraphs
3.  Must answer prompt / be on topic

If the following steps are followed (and time and care are taken) no revised essay should earn below a 4.0 holistic score.

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