Revise Hero Essay

Students - DUE Thurs Oct 11th  or Friday Oct 12th

Please log into Myaccess.com* and edit/revise your Definition of a Hero essay.  The edited/revised version should fix the following errors:
Editing
1. Spelling
2. Grammar (especially Sub/Verb agreement)
3.  No contractions
4. No 2nd person pronouns (you, your, yours)
5.  No use of the word "Reason(s)"
Revising
1. Intro paragraph must include a thesis sentence  
2. Length must be 5 paragraphs
3.  Must answer prompt / be on topic

If the following steps are followed (and time and care are taken) no revised essay should earn below a 4.0 holistic score.

*Login = Firstname student# (no spaces)
  Password = 999lastname

DEADLINE UPDATE

OMM Portfolio deadline has been moved to October 15 (bl 4) and 16 (bl 1, 5).   All work must be turned in on those days.

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Vocabulary Document for OMM Portfolio

The Google Document for the vocabulary portion of the Of Mice and Men Portfolio has now been shared with every student via their G-Star email.  Any one who did not receive the document should see me immediately for troubleshooting.

Students email addresses should be in the following format:  Lastname.gstar.yearofgraduation@gmail.com
ex.  Smith.gstar.2015@gmail.com